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一、別再“抒情”,改成“呈現”
不寫我很孤獨、我很想你,只寫場景、動作、物件、細節,情緒越不說破,越高級。
二、別再“堆意象”,改成“守氣質”
一首詩只保留2到3個核心意象,冷暖、輕重、明暗統一,不亂搭。
三、別再“寫順”,改成“留白”
能斷就斷,能跳就跳,不說滿、不解釋、不鋪墊。
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