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第一部分
記敘文體裁解讀及人物描寫點撥
體裁解讀:
記敘文是以記人敘事為主要內容的文章,通常包括六個要索:時間、地點、人物、事件、原因及結果,寫作時各要素要交代清楚,但并不要求全部具備。寫記敘類文章時除了六個要素外,還要注意以下幾點:
1、記敘方式
通常有順敘、倒敘和插敘三種。順敘是英語記敘文最常用的一 種記敘方式,即按照事件發(fā)展的時間先后順序來敘述。
2、人稱
一般用第一人稱和第三人稱進行寫作。第一人稱是從“參與者”親眼所見、親耳所聞的經(jīng)歷開始敘述;第三人稱是以“觀察者”的身份進行記敘,通過作者與讀者之外的第三者,直接把故事呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前。
3、時態(tài)
記敘文用于記敘過去發(fā)生的事件或經(jīng)歷,因此常用一般過去時, 還可根據(jù)上下文輔以其他時態(tài)。
人物描寫點撥:
人物描寫類的作文, 大多圍繞親情、友情、師生情、榜樣力量、人物奮斗等話題展開,或敘事抒懷,或表明個人對人物所持的情感。此類文章以記敘文居多,也可夾敘夾議。來出在中學生英語課程標準中,初中階段的內容與要求中所提到的話題,比如famous people(名人)、interests and hobbies (興趣和愛好)等,會涉及到人物描寫。
人物描寫的文章,對人物各方面的描寫是必不可少的:外貌描寫、語言描寫、神態(tài)描寫、動作描寫、心理描寫等等,根據(jù)文章的需要,確定寫哪些,哪些詳寫,哪些略寫。寫人離不開寫事,因為人物的特點總是在具體的事例中表現(xiàn)出來的。文章時態(tài)要根據(jù)事情發(fā)生的頻率而定:經(jīng)常性的行為多用一般現(xiàn)在時, 一次性的行為多用一般過去時,當然,其他時態(tài)也可能會涉及。
在寫人的時候,我們可以通過以下三部分來寫作:
1、簡單介紹人物的概況
般包括姓名 、性別、年齡、職業(yè)、家庭背景等。寫作時使用的語青必須符合英語表達習慣如姓名的書寫、年齡的表達、人稱或稱呼的法取等。
2、從多方面對人物進行刻面
為了使人物的形象豐滿起來,給讀者留下深刻印象,我們可以對人物的外貌、神態(tài)、動作等進行描寫,并選取簡短的事例來說明其品質和個性。在具體寫作時,要正確把握現(xiàn)在時、過去時和將來時的用法。
3、對人物進行評價
在文章結尾處要介紹你對人物的評價或談論你的個人感受,無論是喜歡還是討厭,是稱贊還是批評,都要明確地表達出來。
第二部分
寫人記敘文萬能模板
①
Do you know _______ (引出人物)?
She / He is _______ (人物身份).
②
She / He is tall and _______ (身材).
She / He always wears _______ (表情) and gives us the impression that _______ (每人的印象).
She / He is good at _______(特長)
She / He always helps me out whenever I _______.
Once _______ (引出事列) To my surprise, _______ (她/他的做法).
③ She / He is _______ and I hope _______ (表達愿望).
模板內容要點
① 引出人物
② 詳細介紹人物
③ 做出評價,表達感想
第三部分
必備詞匯與套用句型
必備亮點詞匯
beautiful 漂亮的
pretty 漂亮的
handsome 帥氣的
strong 強壯的
round face 圓臉
broad face 寬臉
straight hair 直發(fā)
curly hair 卷發(fā)
short/long hair 短/長發(fā)
long nose 高鼻梁
ordinary-looking 長相普通的
wear glasses 戴眼鏡
graduate from... 畢業(yè)于...
get a ... degree 得到...學位
get further education 深造
study abroad 出國留學
humorous 幽默的
clever/smart 聰明的
patient 耐心的
hard-working 努力的
friendly 友好的
warm-hearted 熱心的
be fond of... 喜...
enjoy doing sth. 喜歡做菜事
be crazy about... 對...著迷
be interested in... 對....感興趣
be in the lead 處于領先地位
knowledgeable 知識淵博的
famous 著名的
well-known 知名的
be remembered as... 被后人譽為...
be regarded as... 被當...
be respected by... 受...尊微
devote one's lifetime to... 傾注畢生精力
live in... 居住在...
be born in... 出生...
live a happy busy life 過著幸福/忙碌的生活
經(jīng)典套用句型
閃亮篇首句
(1) Wang Nan, a world champion in ping-pong, is ... tall with the weight of...
王楠,乒乓球世界冠軍,高... 體重...
(2) My mother is a rural woman, who...
我的母親是一個農(nóng)村婦女,她...
(3) ... is young beautiful lady.
...是位年輕漂亮的女士。
(4) If you ask me who ... I will tell you it is ... at once.
如果你問誰是...,我會馬上告訴...
(5) ... was from a worker / teacher's family.
...生于一個工人/教師家庭。
(6) He / She was born on ... (time) in ... (place).
他/她出生在 ... (時間) ... (地點)。
出彩篇中句
(1) Her eyes are very big / bright.
她的眼睛很大/很明亮。
(2) He often wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.
他經(jīng)常穿著像牛仔和T恤之類的便裝。
(3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...
他沒怎么上過學,但是他知道...
(4) His / Her family was so poor / rich that...
他/她的家庭是如此的貧窮/富裕以至于....
(5) He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.
他每天都努力工作賺錢來供養(yǎng)我們的家庭。
(6) I was about to...when...
我正要...突然...
(7) He / She worked hard so as to improve...
他/她為了提高...工作很努力。
(8) His/Her father was so strict with him/her that...
他/她的父親對他/她是如此的嚴厲以至...
精彩篇尾句
(1) He deserves / is worthy of our respect.
他值得我們尊重。
(2) Without her help, I will never...
如果沒有她的幫助,我永遠都無法...
(3) I will respect and love ... forever.
我將會永遠尊敬和愛戴...
(4) She is honest and always ready to help others.
她為人誠實,并且樂于助人。
(5) She has set an example for...
她給....樹立了榜樣。
(6) Now I understand my father's love for me. I will never forget my father.
現(xiàn)在我明白了父親對我的愛。我永遠不會忘記我的父親。
第四部分
模板范文演練
你身邊的每個人對你來說都具有特殊的意義。請以“My special”為題用英語寫一篇短文,描述你家庭的某個成員或你的朋友、老師、同學等。
要求:
1. 在題目空格處填入你要描述的對象,如teacher或friend等;
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;
3. 80詞左右。
My special
萬能模板套用分析
首先,點明要敘述的人物
其次,對要敘述的人物進行詳細的介紹。
最后,發(fā)表感受
滿分范文
My special friend
Do you know Mr.Smith? He is my English teacher.
He is special to me because he treats me as a good friend. ①He always wears a smile and gives me the impression that he can help me out whenever I am in difficulty.
He has a good sense of humor and likes making friends. ②His classes are very interesting. After class, he often helps me with my English. He never smokes. He likes playing football. He likes China so much that he is planning to live in China in the future. (長短句結合原則,前面是簡單句,此句是so...that引導的結果狀語從句。)
③ He is my special friend who l like very much, and I hope I can keep in touch with him. (句式多變原則,此句為復合句,who又引導定語從句。)
你也可以這樣表達
① Treating me as a good friend, he is special to me.
② He is humorous and likes making friends.
③ He has so much deep love for China that he is planning to live in China in the future
第五部分
熱點話題滿分寫人記敘文必背
01
東京奧運會上跳水小將全紅嬋一戰(zhàn)成名,給全世界留下了深刻印象。假設你是Mary,你的筆友John想多了解一些全紅嬋的相關情況。請你給John寫一封信,介紹一下這位奧運小明星并表達你對她的祝愿。要點如下:
Age
14
From
Guangdong
Team
Chinese diving team
Family
Parents (farmers);
the second child
Looks
Love
diving (every day)
Like
computer games
(free time)
Dream
more champions (冠軍)
注意事項:
1. 信件必須包括以上要點信息,要求語句通順,意思連貫;
2. 詞數(shù)60個左右,信件的開頭和結尾部分已在答題卷上給出,不計入總詞數(shù);
3. 信件必須寫在答題卷的指定位置上。
Dear John,
I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan.
All the best, Mary
優(yōu)秀滿分范文
Dear John,
I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan. She’s 14. She comes from Guangdong. She’s in Chinese diving team. Quan’s parents are farmers. She’s the second child in her family. She’s short and thin. She looks cute. She loves diving and practises it every day. In her free time, she likes playing computer games. Her dream is to get more champions for China. I hope her dream comes true.
All the best,
Mary
詳解
1. 題干解讀:
該題目屬于書信作文。題目要求是請你以Mary的身份,根據(jù)提示背景,給你的筆友John寫一封60詞左右的信,向他介紹一下奧運小明星全紅嬋,并表達你對她的祝愿。
2. 寫法指導:
本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要是第三人稱;寫作中,要根據(jù)提示要點介紹全紅嬋的個人信息、家庭信息,最后表達你對全紅嬋的祝愿。文章要緊扣題目要點,千萬不要遺漏要點,內容可適發(fā)揮,但要保證語句通順,意思連貫,語言的表述要符合語法的結構,造句要符合英語的表達習慣,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。
02
請以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”為題,從外貌、性格、愛好或其他方面介紹一下你身邊的一個人在這幾年的變化。
要求:
1. 至少寫出三個變化,可適當發(fā)揮;
2. 80詞左右。
He/She Has Changed a Lot
優(yōu)秀滿分范文
He Has Changed a Lot
My friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.
Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food. Three years ago, his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily. So he took doctor’s advice and did more exercise to lose weight. Now he is thinner and healthier.
Jimmy used to hate the school life. One year ago, he and his parents had a long talk. That’s when he decided to change. Now he studies harder than he used to. He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.
Jimmy used to be shy. His face would turn red when he talked to people. Now he is more outgoing and can give speeches in public. That makes him more popular.
People sure change! I’m glad to see my friend’s great change.
詳解
題干解讀:
該題目是話題作文,從外貌、性格、愛好或其他方面介紹一下你身邊的一個人在這幾年的變化。
寫作指導:
人稱用第三人稱;時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時;寫作時,可采用“總分總”的思路來寫,先說這個人在過去幾年發(fā)生了很大的變化,然后具體闡述變化體現(xiàn)的方面,最后進行總結。注意保證內容完整、結構清晰,無語法和拼寫錯誤。
03
根據(jù)要求完成小作文。談一談自己的一個愛好。
優(yōu)秀滿分范文
Everyone has hobbies. Hobbies give us a lot of happiness. Then what’s my hobby? My hobby is listening to music.
When I was a child, I enjoy listening to music, especially the cartoon music. As I grow up, I like all kinds of music. Though I’m not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.
Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try. You’ll find it so good.
詳解
1. 題干解讀:
題干要求談論自己的愛好。寫作時,應圍繞自己的一個愛好進行介紹,并適當添加具體內容,比如,有這一愛好的原因或這一愛好的好處是什么。
2. 寫作指導:
本文時態(tài)應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主,人稱主要使用第一人稱。可分為三段:第一段點明自己的愛好是什么;第二段陳述這一愛好的好處;第三段對自己的愛好進行推薦并收尾。寫作時,注意主謂一致,無語法和標點錯誤。
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